Commander Data

(long time since i've been on) Hey, the klingons would have won i think, but if the vulcanes allies joined in (the federatioN) then they would prob. win.

HEHE no worrys its Very Good and Funny :P

I have continued on the script. I chose Tenebre... version of the captains log. but what do ya think of the bit i wrote after that? Star Trek: United Front Pilot Episode: The Unknown Captain's log - Stardate 1234: Having taken command of the newly commissioned Nebula Class vessel the U.S.S. Serenity and having taken aboard a full compliment at Starbase 8, we have set course for our first mission on the planet Jalka. We've been tasked to assist the colonists settle in but the mission brings us uncomfortably close to the Romulan border and there have been reports of Valdore class ships in the vicinity - needless to say, this could prove a real test of this new crews mettle. (the captain is in his study room) Ships onboard speakers: Calling Captain Captain Ralac Sebrask: Yes, what is it Ensign? Ensign on speakers: We are now only some million miles from the Neutralzone, sir, and 3 hours from the Planet Jalka, do you wish to come up? Captain Ralac Sebrask: No, inform me if something happens, I've got a meeting with my new first officer, commander Shkart Zhen. That's all sir. Ensign on speakers: Ok sir, Ill inform you if something happens. (Captain Sebrask sits down and reads a book by Charles Dickens while he's waiting) The door rings. Captain Ralac Sebrask: Come in Commander Shkart Zhen: Sir, reporting for meeting (the captain lays down his book) Captain Ralac Sebrask: Yes, as captain for this ship I've have made my self time to meet my new main bridge crew, starting with you. It says here in your file that you like nearly all Andorians like to call humans Pink Skins, but in this ship I don't want to be hearing those words. Now, I chose you to be my first officer because it says in you record that you are a loyal officer and follows orders to the letter, and I like that in a officer. Commander Shkart Zhen: Thank you for letting me join your crew. I will make you proud for choosing me.

Thx for the help keep writting :P

Hi guys, sry for not being active the last 4 weeks, but im back for the moment, I need some response about my introduction for a new star trek series, Star Trek United Front. I wish if you people could reply here about if i done some mistakes, or if the Captains log thing is to long and if you got some ideas that would be great, and i want to know if its OK what i've written so far. Please reply :P Star Trek: United Front Pilot Episode: The Unknown Captains log. Star date ???? : The Crew of the newly commissioned NCC-29501 U. S. S. Serenity, Nebula Class including myself Captain Ralac Sebrask fresh from the U. S. S. Explorer have been sent out on it's first mission towards the newly found class m planet, named Jalka. Our mission is to help the new colonies on planet Jalka to settle in, but the course towards the planet will set us closely near to the Romulan boarder, I hope that we wont get into a fight with a Romulan Valdore class ship. With me as the first Captain onboard this ship, Starfleet has chosen out the bridge officers for this ship, starting with my first officer Commander Shkart Zhen an Andorian known for his opinions Then we come to pilot of my new ship Lieutenant Commander Julia Johansen, one of the few norwegians in Starfleet. In the infirmary and main engineering we got the vulcans Lieutenant Commander Sheran and T'Shal, I will be looking forward to see how logical they are.

But if you say that then we could say: Lets say the federation had a superweapon what could kill all the dominion people in one blast :P We cant say Lets say because that didnt happen. Talk about what really happend instead of let saying. its no point in that because that didnt happen..... (sry for that jonathan :P)

Hehe i used that music because its about coming a long way but far 2 go. It's the same with me. i've played long enough in css but got a long way 2 go before i get really good (i bought css 1 year ago exacly this date) PS. the film is about me getting owned... :P

you should watch finish the ENT series, After season 3 it begins to get better. Watch the Mirror Universe episodes in season 4 they are the best in ENT.

Kirok = Kirk in the tos episode The Paradise Syndrome

my first css film.... :P be gentle with the comments

Salish A person from the TOS episode The Paradise Syndrome

After Happy Birthday STAR TREK!!

3. The President of the federation was not human (this was seen in Star Trek film 6, The undiscovered country) so not all humans got the highest ranks and on a DS9 Episode then we see a Vulcan Captain and on many other episodes.... 6. The Kazons encounted Voyager many times because Janeway explored the Delta place by stopping to nevly every friendly planet and checking out star clusters and sightseeing :P

Like the 2 episodes I've seen so far. Soon George Takei will be staring in one of them :P (Guys this isnt spam)

1. Start of by writting posts in topics all ready existed. 2. After you done 1. a bit then start by spamming on the existing topics (like on those from 1.) (not total spam) 3. Start with making silly Topics like I vs Him and to get more posts in there then add a poll. 4. After making some silly polls w8 for some silly answeres that come from me and then answer that by spam. 5. W8 for a reply from TFMF :P who says something like this: Commander Data has done it again :D, Then you reply by adding a smiley face to get some extra posts, 6. By after 5 you have come up to the rank of Command Chief in lesser then a mounth (like me :P) This post is an exampel of how you can get extras posts fast. (Moderators please dont block this topic off untill i've gotten about 5-10 replys :Pplus its under Ten Forward where everything is allowed, I think :P)