cbosdell Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 http://www.cbosdell.com/season5.php Its a 26 episode season five for enterprise. I did it in response to a trekbbs thread and it was suggested I post it here to get some reviews. Criticism and comments are welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMF Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 Look forward to season 6 :cyclops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeneralLee Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 Very creative. Keep it up, and someday, you might just make a living at writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyran Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 looks great to me wheres the torrent lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 Looks great. I really wanted to see more romulans and im sure that was the direction they were going in had they continued. Although the romulan war seems a bit similar to the dominion was (denobula=cardassia, etc) there is really no way around that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbosdell Posted March 6, 2006 Author Share Posted March 6, 2006 Looks great. I really wanted to see more romulans and im sure that was the direction they were going in had they continued. Although the romulan war seems a bit similar to the dominion was (denobula=cardassia, etc) there is really no way around that. yeah, I thought the same thing however the reality is there HAD to be a reason why Denobula was not a founding member of the Federation and why we did not see a single Denobulan after Enterprise. Plus I figured the whole Denobulan thing would be interesting having Denobulan being a fallen world when an entire episode had been on the planet earlier in the season. And I wanted Phlox to have an emotional story arc to go through so he would have more screentime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiteShdw Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 I think it would have been a great Season 5! I especially like how you stretched out the season to cover several years through the wars and the establishment of the Federation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrDad Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 if only.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeneralLee Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 yeah, I thought the same thing however the reality is there HAD to be a reason why Denobula was not a founding member of the Federation and why we did not see a single Denobulan after Enterprise. Plus I figured the whole Denobulan thing would be interesting having Denobulan being a fallen world when an entire episode had been on the planet earlier in the season. And I wanted Phlox to have an emotional story arc to go through so he would have more screentime. Eh? Please explain. Is it mentioned somewhere that Cardassia conqured Denobula? And if so, what later became of the Denobulans? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TetsuoShima Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 I see no lack of inspiration there... :) Now, if we could persuade them to have a look.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbosdell Posted March 6, 2006 Author Share Posted March 6, 2006 yeah, I thought the same thing however the reality is there HAD to be a reason why Denobula was not a founding member of the Federation and why we did not see a single Denobulan after Enterprise. Plus I figured the whole Denobulan thing would be interesting having Denobulan being a fallen world when an entire episode had been on the planet earlier in the season. And I wanted Phlox to have an emotional story arc to go through so he would have more screentime. Eh? Please explain. Is it mentioned somewhere that Cardassia conqured Denobula? And if so, what later became of the Denobulans? no. I was saying it was very similar what happens to the denobulans as the cardassians - Phlox our friendly denobulan has his people 'occupied' and mostly exterminated just like Garek and the Cardassians on DS9 by the Dominion. I probably could have phrased my reply better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbosdell Posted March 6, 2006 Author Share Posted March 6, 2006 for anyone interested i just posted an alternate ending which basically is the last episode split up into two episodes with a few changes. However there are enough differences that it was worth posting. I did it because the last episode took place over the course of two years. Go with whichever ending you like best. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mav Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 Something in the old noggin says theres a wee bit somethin wrong with your 5x15. Hoshi and T'pol meet Romulans basically? Granted my knowledge of TOS canon is, skittish at best, but wasn't Kirk the first Captain we knew of to make contact with Romulans? Other wise why would they go to such lengths to hide the two Romulan guys in Season 4 from Archers sight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbosdell Posted March 6, 2006 Author Share Posted March 6, 2006 Something in the old noggin says theres a wee bit somethin wrong with your 5x15. Hoshi and T'pol meet Romulans basically? Granted my knowledge of TOS canon is, skittish at best, but wasn't Kirk the first Captain we knew of to make contact with Romulans? Other wise why would they go to such lengths to hide the two Romulan guys in Season 4 from Archers sight? no you misread my thing. What i said was T'Pol and Hoshi are stranded together on an asteroid after their shuttlepod is damaged by a Romulan Patrol ship. They are the only people on an asteroid and that part is basically them having character interaction and stuff while waiting for rescue. The Romulan patrol most likely thought the shuttlepod was destroyed or something and returned to the mothership which Enterprise had to fight in order to get to Hoshi and T'Pol. No Romulans are seen. B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dabrood Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 I think I could have loved that season. Great ideas and reasoning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Centurion Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 Great job! Bring on season 6! :) When will Paramount understand what the fans really want? :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mateya Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 I like it. The only thing I have to ask is - why Daedalus? It so much resembles Stargates Daedalus - isnt it a bit awkward? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenebrae Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 Pretty bland really... but people seem to lap that kind of uninspired Trek up... me, I'd have favoured something like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbosdell Posted March 8, 2006 Author Share Posted March 8, 2006 Pretty bland really... but people seem to lap that kind of uninspired Trek up... me' date=' I'd have favoured something like this you are kidding right? (I am guessing you are but I decided to reply anyways) Those 'episodes' are random crap completly ripping the names of other trek episodes in order to be a parody. At least mine were well researched and had titles and descriptions that werent done with malice against Enterprise as that page definately was. I like it. The only thing I have to ask is - why Daedalus? It so much resembles Stargates Daedalus - isnt it a bit awkward? mayeta -- cannon establishes that the daedalus class was launched in the 2160s after the formation of the federation with the USS Daedalus being the first of the class. All similarites to Stargate are completely unintentional :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted March 8, 2006 Share Posted March 8, 2006 Pretty bland really... but people seem to lap that kind of uninspired Trek up... me' date=' I'd have favoured something like this Cmon, take it easy. No need to be rude. --- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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